A doctor in Brisbane, Australia needed Band 8 IELTS to strengthen her application for immigration. She came to me for help.
From an analysis of Task 2 practice essays it was evident that this writer had developed many advanced writing skills. However, she needed to learn one more, how to edit and delete unnecessary words.in her texts. Redundant (not needed) words were making her sentences too long and difficult to read. She quickly understood her problem after listening to video feedback to the 5 challenges that I had provided in my e-Course Video Pack: MC3 Write Task 2 Essays. The student was empowered as she could now self-correct, which made a dramatic difference to the fluency and accuracy of her writing. After 5 weeks of regularly writing Task 2 Essays under exam conditions, she could write more concisely and got the Band 8 score that she needed..
Edit and redraft your Task 2 practice essays. Throw out extra words that are redundant.
Watch my video 3 strategies to help you write more concisely.
MC3 Write IELTS Task 2 Essays
This e-Course Video Pack includes video feedback on 5 writing challenges.
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